There are some problems with this:
It sounds quite dull, especially in the beginning. Just feels like there is nothing gonig on besides hi-hats.
And its too long for what it is. Theres no melody or anything memorable about it and I think it would have been better if you just compresed the whole track to about 1 minute and just called it a loop.
Im not trying to be rude, just take that as constructive criticism :)
I'm sorry, but this doesn't really sound like a finished project.
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